The Final Scroll
The mouse wheel came to a screeching halt and an eerie silence loomed. The light emanated from the screen casting a dim gray shadow about the room. The gray light smashed into a contorted face stretched beyond its normal bounds under the burden of consciousness. It had failed to receive the release of slumber. The eyes became swelled rivers of blood, bulging from the blunt bludgeon of worry. The bags underneath the eyes dropped like a waterfall crashing to the face, yet after the initial plunge existed only a billow, silently lolling down the creased cheek. Stale sweat stuck to the face, suffocating the wrinkles, a spawn from the sludge of vexation. The hands quivered beneath the annoyance of the venomous coffee, uncontrollably shaking. In the future, only a glimmer could be seen, only a faint voice could be heard. Once again immersed in only silence. The typing became faster and the words blurred like a long serpent slithering into an enigmatic realm one could merely dream about. It was no longer an attempt to finish; there was no chance to stop. Consciousness wavered, duty forgotten. Memories became juxtaposed in a phantasmagoric nightmare. Slightly, ever so slightly, the being slumped and rested upon the keyboard, shaking, shivering in the dark, devoid of thought, feeling, and emotion. The symbiotic relationship of mankind and machine faded into a façade. Machine was the parasite and mankind the host. It remained motionless beneath the screen; forever a part of the machine, nothing more, there is no less. (Andrew Sippie)
4 Comments:
This is very well-written! I was truly suprised as the story turned out to be about writing. I know what it's like to have that the mad dash when you're inspired, and how you stop eating or sleeping...
This is truly a great peice about a hampster. The wheel and the mouse. The scrolling and the collapse. Just as you cannot out-stare a photograph, so is man also unable to out-think a computer in an endurance competition. The computer sleeps when it can, yet we who are mere mortals more swiftly bend to the demands of fatigue. Though the machine is never greater than it's master, the hampster is the oft-forgotten key. Scroll on 'Mon Capitan.'
I love your story about the hamster. The mouse and the user. The wheel and the scroll. Just as a human cannot stare down a photograph, so also can man not compete today in a contest of intellectual endurance with their machine. The computer sleeps when it's able, yet man must still sleep as necessary yielding to the demands of fatigue. With substance man may put off sleep, yet he is helpless then to stop the inevitably ensuing insanity; indeed, if he is not already insane. The description of your man was one of the most eloquent I've heard in a long time. And semicolons are clearly there to be misused, if we are to follow the example of our elders and peers.
Not only are we to believe that there was, at some point, a mutual sharing of existence between man and machine, (symbiotic relationship), but that, by the end of this piece, machine has nullified that relationship and in fact triumphed over man in survival.
Might I suggest a poem Mr. Sippie wrote, that deals obtusely with the same harrowing idea, that goes by the name "Obsolete."
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