Thursday, February 16, 2006

The world is dark, and the world is so cold.
It's filled with demons that are far too bold
To allow the young to grow to be old.

I lie in my bed and try to slumber-
To block the screams I hear in great number.
Whether it's real or inside of my head
Means nothing when I fear I'll soon be dead.

Perhaps it will be even worse than that.
This shadow could take me in no time flat.
My soul could be a prisoner of war,
Slave of the demons I've tried to ignore.

The darkness crowds in all around my bed.
Who will save me from this thing that I dread?
Please stop it before its hunger is fed!

(Nate Dorner)

2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Powerful imagery! Also a very unique rhyme sheme... I like how the triplets enclose the middle stanzas

12:27 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

very strong poem, i like that it makes me feel like a kid whose nightlight has just broken.

4:36 PM  

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